With a view to continuing the colour scheme and visual impression of the cover, I gave my contents page a pale grey under layer to start to ease away from the black and white effect that I used on my cover image. Although not a striking shade, I felt that a bright colour would be too different from the simplistic effects exploited on my cover. Considering that the contents page should be an extension of the cover, I needed the transition to look similar rather than distinct.
My first approach was going to be to use the photos of my granddad for the main image on the page, but after doing a trial run of this, I found that the images did not have a good definition to be enlarged as the visual focus of the page.
Instead, this is my alternative, a photo that isn't overwhelming but starts to introduce the colour onto the page. This was another of my farm photographs that strongly connotes rurality. I haven't referred to Jax's rustic lifestyle on the front cover, and since the magazine will progress chronologically, this will act as the first introduction to his agricultural background. As a result it foreshadows the secondary topical focus of the article regarding his upbringing and heritage.
The position of the photo on the page is a deliberate attempt to mimic that of my flat plans, with the features taking precedence on the left and the subheadings; reviews, new releases and festival updates following underneath.
I continued by outlining where each section would go before I aligned the text in the available space. This was a sensible step that allowed me to organise the page in a basic layout before I added the detail. The masthead was carried over in a smaller scale to reinstate the importance of the institution (all magazine companies do this) by showing ownership of the product. I added the 'contents' title in a bold and identifiable font, whilst 'features' was given less prominence.
The next thing to do was drag over the dateline from my front cover onto the contents page. Like the masthead signifying possession, this is done to establish recency and current relevance. The completed digital structure is outlined in the format above. The bottom half of the page will be dedicated to 3 main areas as covered in my flat plans. The smaller box positioned directly under the image will be the stand out feature which, in this case, is Jax Crowford. The text will be in a larger font here to demonstrate his priority in this issue of the magazine.
I proceeded by editing the top half of my contents page, mainly focused on the features. Taking inspiration from the conventions employed by most magazines, I decided to write the page number, headline and topic sentence in unique colours to give them an obvious association across the page. I gave the page numbers the identical blue colour used on the masthead and the page numbers on the double-page spread. The black used as the headings stood out in contrast to the lighter colours on the page. If anything, I wanted the reader to notice who the features were about. Consequently if they then showed interest, they would move onto the summary sentence, indicated in white. Contents pages are all about simplicity, so I wanted the layout and colour to be as basic but impactful as possible.
To promote the primary feature of that issue, I used a dark blue border to distinguish it from the other articles. The thin blue rectangle extending from the features section determines whereabouts in the chronology of the layout Jax Crowford's story would go. The three topics that acted as cover lines on the front cover: Jax Crowford, Carrie Underwood and The White Buffalo are also mentioned in this section to express continuity.
Since I am intending for my audience to be on a national scale I needed some British artists to reference in this list. 'The Shires' are a duo with an intriguing origin, which provides an alternate attraction since it encourages local country enthusiasts. Meanwhile, the features 'Daniel Myers' and 'Ken Ashton' are fictional creations that I developed to serve as other British country icons, so I make some reference towards their heritage in the description. The final two features are Tim McGraw (an acclaimed American country artists) and 'The Hitchhikers', another band that I fictionalised.
Since the features are expected to be the biggest attraction on the magazine's contents, I used topics like releasing new albums and returning to music after decades of retirement in order to give the subjects some degree of unique importance and justify their presence as feature stories.
The bottom half of the page tested my creativity, not in terms of visual attraction, but in terms of content. I needed a long list of plausible examples under each category. Starting with the 'Reviews' section, the only reference to real events is the 'New Years Rockin' Eve' heading which is part of the reason Carrie Underwood is a feature in this issue. This establishes a connection and gives the overall magazine a sense of real time since different features collaborate and happened in the near past.
Other things on that list all consist of fictional albums released by fictional artists. Despite this I wanted to create variation and a sense of humanity in each of the artists, so I used references to Shakespeare, age and personal loss to humanise my fiction in order to evoke empathy and realism. For example the subheading 'Blackbird' is an album released in memory of the artist's late wife, which inspires sympathy and remembrance.
Of course since this is the review section, I needed to adopt a critical tone in the summaries to tease the reader's interpretation of whether the review will be positive or negative. An example is in the phrase 'slow but memorable' which doesn't provide an in depth examination, rather a brief summary that reflects the magazine's critical viewpoint. 'Review' is written in a black font to separate it from the features (written in white), because I wanted to imply that the features were more significant than the sub-divisions towards the bottom.
I countered the demand for lots of examples by including a secondary image to support the visual promotion. This was an opportunity for me to make use out of the photos of my granddad, since I could use him as an aesthetic supplement to one of my stories. The New Releases subdivision allowed me to explore the theme of aged stereotypes, with my granddad serving as an artist who was outdated and retired. His title (indicated in the blue colour to isolate it) is followed with a description that establishes the surprise in his comeback. 'Growing old gracefully is not on the table for Ashley Johnson' connotes surprise and scepticism.
As well as new albums, I created variety by referring to hit singles.
The final section, Festival Updates, was slightly more difficult. There are not many solely country festivals across the UK, and so I raised this issue in one of my page headings. I created a festival called 'Strum' which was going to be a combination of country, blues and rock music. Adding that in 2016 'country has been selected as the dominant genre' establishes that country music is being given superiority.
As well as this, I thought that an insightful update could be from the perspective of a festival organiser, hence 'Graham Liston' as an experienced showrunner for large concert projects.
In terms of layout, one thing that should be recognised is the close similarities to my flatplans. Instead of just a segregated, columnised list, the sections follow on in a progressive format. I did this because if I had a column for each section, I would need to find an equal number of examples to contribute to each column, which appears too unrealistic and structured.
From the font I wanted to capture two main factors. Firstly, it needed to have a definitive clarity, so that it was penetrating to look at but also easy to interpret. Secondly, it needed to uphold a level of formality that didn't undermine the tone of my magazine but also didn't overpower the audience with broadsheet-style sophistication.
So, this is a draft of my finished design. The reason I say draft is because I am not entirely convinced that it adopts the right layout, and there are some modifications to the content that I would like to make before I submit my final product.
Due to this, the above contents page is only a temporary design that is likely to be subject to change.












































